The Woman In White – Part 2

The Woman In White part 1

The Woman In White – Part 1

Rina opened her eyes slowly and looked around. She was sitting alone under a very old tree. It had roots hanging down from above. Rina looked confused. All around her seems so unfamiliar. She wondered where she was.

Rina thought that she might be dreaming. She rubbed both her eyes and even pinched herself. Again she looked around. Rina felt scared and was in tears.

The Woman In White - Part 2

She tried to recall what had happened to her. She had flashbacks of her short conversation with Amelia at the hospital. She remembered walking to the toilet shortly after but then her mind went blank.

Rina started crying out for help. But she could only hear the echoes of her own voice. She looked up at the sky. It was getting dark. She knew that if she wanted to get out of there, she got to find her own way out.

Thinking that there might be wild animals about, gave her the shivers. Again Rina started calling out for help. This time she shouted much louder. But all she heard in return were deathly silence.

Rina decided to walk around to find a way out. After walking for sometime, she heard the sound of footsteps heading towards her. Thinking that it was someone from a nearby village or something, Rina started calling out for help. But to her despair, no one responded.

Rina knew that was her only chance to get help, so with all the strength that she had left within her, Rina started running and shouting. Help! Help! Can you hear me?

Suddenly something grabbed her left leg. Rina tripped and fell and hurt her ankle. She moaned in pain. She tried to stand up but her ankle was hurting badly. She had no choice but to sit for a while and forget her chance to get help from whoever it was that she heard walking just now.

In a flash, her eyes caught sight of a piece of white cloth sticking out of the ground. Curiosity got the most of her. She dragged herself nearer to it to take a closer look at what it was.

Then using her bare hands, Rina started digging. The soil was damp so it was easier for her to dig. A moment later, her right hand caught hold of something. Rina pulled it out hard and got a shocked to see what looks like parts and pieces of a skeleton. Rina screamed and screamed.

The Woman In White Skeleton

Then all of a sudden, she felt someone tapping her shoulder and calling out her name. Rina started to tremble and shut her eyes tightly. Too afraid to turn around.

The Woman In White – Part 3

It took me longer than I expected to complete part 2. So for those of you that were waiting to continue reading, I am sorry to keep you waiting. But I do hope you enjoyed reading this. And as the same as part 1, the comment section are open for critics and positive comment. I can now breathe a sigh of relief and start typing part 3.

The Woman In White - Part 2
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45 Thoughts to “The Woman In White – Part 2”

  1. I was wondering how the first part would continue on here. You’ve got a knack for suspense and thriller.

  2. I can’t wait to see where this goes! How did she get there? Who is the skeleton? Who found her? You are keeping me on the edge of my seat, I can’t wait to read the next part.

  3. Wow! That was very creative. I had to go back and read part one to understand what was going on ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. This was actually pretty great! I love paranormal everything, especially stories. It kept me interested which is what I have to have to continue reading a story or book.

  5. Marjie Mare

    I am sure my older daughter would be delighted to read that post. She loves this genre, therefore, I am sharing this post with her.

  6. I’m really enjoying reading your series – can’t wait for the next instalment! I love the tension you create…

  7. This is a great read. You’re very talented at writing and I love the suspense in your writing! Keep it up! ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. I’m a big fan of paranormal, reading and suggestions so I like to read these things!

  9. Ooh! You’ve ended it on quite a cliffhanger!

  10. this gets more and more interesting! it is thrilling and you have a talent for words!

  11. Joanna

    I haven’t read the first part, so I will go right now to do so, and understand the story better. I am curious to know what happens next.

  12. Eeeek super suspenseful! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Can’t wait for part 3!!

  13. Liza Perry

    Scary haha! Rina is not afraid ! She screamed and screamed but still with her broken anckle digged ! Did you know there’s a legend about a women in white in France? Scary! Can wait for whats happening to Rina!

  14. Megha

    I really love reading your stories. Waiting for the next part.

  15. Gavin

    Wow – such a good read. Canโ€™t wait to see what happens to Rina

  16. Dalene Ekirapa

    Ha-ha! That was kinda spooky. Just reminds me of the horror movies I used to watch. I wouldn’t want to be in Rina’s shoes.

  17. These posts could really turn into a book series.

  18. omg this is an amazing story! Can’t believe you stopped it there!!! Who is tapping her shoulder, i need to know lol…Can’t wait for part 2!!!

  19. What a great series! I have never come across a blog that has the feeling of a scary movie. Keep up the great work and can’t wait for the next part!

    XO Andie

  20. What a talent to keep up in suspense! I loved it. I’m intrigued as to the outcome. Looking forward to the next part.


  21. Christa

    Iโ€™m so happy to continue reading this and canโ€™t wait for part 3. This is so well-written and suspenseful!

  22. Catherine Santiago Jose

    This is a great stuff to read and very interesting story. But I’m wondering what’s part 1, and wanted to know more about as what this started.

  23. Alexandra Cook

    It was a great read though it was a little bit creepy. I ahve to read part 1 and so excited the next part.

  24. Gaica

    What a great story. This makes me so interested with this. I need to read the 1st part so I can follow it up until the last part.

  25. Did the skeleton grab her? Is the skeleton really her and the person that she’s about to confront her as well? Is this all a figment of her imagination? Is she in a dream that she can’t escape? Can’t wait for the continuation.

  26. I had to go read part 1! This is very entertaining — I really want to know what’s going to happen! Keep up the great work!

  27. You have a real talent for writing a suspenseful prose! Thanks for sharing! It is wonderful of you to share your talent in narrative writing.

  28. Neely Moldovan

    Oh looking forward to reading more! SUch an interesting story!

  29. Sophia

    You’re really good at this! Nice post.

  30. stories like this are my favorites. Thrilling and mysterious indeed! looking forward for the next one!

  31. Alexandra Cook

    I’m so glad to see the second part is available! I love this story and where you’re going with it!

  32. Ah, this ended on such a cliffhanger! Looking forward to finding out what Rina does next!

  33. This is really intense. I didn’t get to read part one so I am going to have to go back and read part one first and then reread this but I am sure it will be interesting. And I am looking forward to more parts.

  34. Nice writing. I love how you set the story in the perspective of Rina and slowly built up the story of everything she sensed.

  35. Surekha Busa

    Oh my God..! I can’t wait for the next chapter..! This is so thrilling…!

  36. I had to go back and reread part 1! Intriguing and flowed really well, cant wait for part 3!

  37. Waking up somewhere I am not suppose to be has definitely been a nightmare for me. I hope its someone good who knocked on her shoulder.

  38. I missed part 1, but the picture of those roots really grabbed me. We sawe similar trees on our recent trip to Kauai – they seemed so innocuous then…

  39. I had to go back to part 1 to understand this and this is so interesting!Great creative story!

  40. Wow, what a story! really scary so far but I would love to learn what happens to Rina next!

  41. Becca Wilson

    This is such a great story. I had to go back to look at the first part. So good!

  42. I am loving this series, so suspenseful! I can’t wait for the next installment of The Woman in White!!

  43. Kim

    You really know how to create suspense! I can’t wait to hear what’s next ๐Ÿ™‚

  44. blair villanueva

    Kidding aside it, I used to see lady in white back in grade school. Philippines have many paranormal happenings, and until I got used to it.

  45. wow, this story gave me chills … love the added pictures also, they put you deeper in the story.

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